Lechin
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Post by Lechin on Sept 17, 2010 0:43:12 GMT -5
Starting off in paradise The first steps having been taken Once full of light Full of goodness Now almost gone Hiding behind a mask Ripped apart Torn down It's take over time! 7 deadly sins stirring up trouble Get help on the double Once full of light Full of goodness 7 deadly sins captured in separate dens The mask crumbles beneath our feet The light springs free Hope reins forever more The battle is over Suffering, sadness, the evil loosing grip The lives that have been lost Never forget our protectors Hope reins forevermore Time sheds What now is instore? Full of goodness Full of light Those 7 deadly sins lost the fight Everything is alright It's time to go home Settle down and live your lives to the fullest It is a hidden message which gives a hint on what goes on in my dreams while I sleep.
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Maple
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Post by Maple on Sept 17, 2010 0:44:46 GMT -5
cool. I like it a lot. That is pretty awesome.
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Lechin
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Post by Lechin on Sept 17, 2010 0:47:03 GMT -5
Thank you very much.
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Maple
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Post by Maple on Sept 17, 2010 0:51:17 GMT -5
Your welcome. I suck at poetry. I was good at it for my age in like 5th grade but now I just suck.
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Lechin
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Post by Lechin on Sept 17, 2010 0:56:56 GMT -5
I feel the same. I thought I was good but I got discouraged by a teacher in the 11th grade. I stopped and now I just made a poem last night. Lol.
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Maple
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Post by Maple on Sept 17, 2010 1:12:59 GMT -5
Cool. It's really good though.
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Mia ♥
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Post by Mia ♥ on Sept 21, 2010 16:02:08 GMT -5
It is good. I don't really like writing poetry, but some people say I'm really good at it. I think that it's just the people who suck at it who thinks mine is amazing. XD
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